Is this new information or just a reorganization/rehash of older diagrams? I t is hard to discern. There *might* be some good work here but it is again, unfortunately illegible. Although this is an internet based, multimedia style format, you cannot let your guard down in terms of how your information is received. As an architect, communication is a vital skill. This is evidenced in writing, verbally and most importantly, in your drawing and visual presentation. As an architect, you must not only present your work to a "lay" person, but also have the same information talk to other professionals as well as tradesman that will ultimately transform your lines on a page into built form. As with the earlier comment on the double scrolling interface template you chose, this post warrants more criticism of the formatting, and thus there is no ability to actually delve into the content.
This is not "circulation" as your title states... Add the sentences about your conclusion here on this post, so that we can visualize and read your conclusion. Thanks Great diagrams.
Lots of information here but as others are saying, it need a brief description for each. Its all well and good doing the exercises set, but it would be useful to see your analysis of each, what you have learnt and how this can help with your design project going forward...
Is this new information or just a reorganization/rehash of older diagrams? I t is hard to discern. There *might* be some good work here but it is again, unfortunately illegible. Although this is an internet based, multimedia style format, you cannot let your guard down in terms of how your information is received. As an architect, communication is a vital skill. This is evidenced in writing, verbally and most importantly, in your drawing and visual presentation. As an architect, you must not only present your work to a "lay" person, but also have the same information talk to other professionals as well as tradesman that will ultimately transform your lines on a page into built form. As with the earlier comment on the double scrolling interface template you chose, this post warrants more criticism of the formatting, and thus there is no ability to actually delve into the content.
ReplyDeleteThe diagrams need some verbal explanation. What did you learn from this exercise. How can it be applied to your own project?
ReplyDeleteThis is not "circulation" as your title states...
ReplyDeleteAdd the sentences about your conclusion here on this post, so that we can visualize and read your conclusion. Thanks
Great diagrams.
Lots of information here but as others are saying, it need a brief description for each. Its all well and good doing the exercises set, but it would be useful to see your analysis of each, what you have learnt and how this can help with your design project going forward...
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